Bear kites

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BEAR KITES

One day I saw people have a flying bear kites. And I asked them if I could join? And they say yes. So I have a small telescope on my pocket, and I was very tired, and then I let my bear kite go, and then I take out my small telescope on my pocket, and then I look at my small telescope on my pocket, and then I look at my bear kite and I saw a bear star just like this and I was surprise and then I call my friends and they were all surprise, and then I saw a star look like a bear. And then my dad calls me so I got to go back. And the next day I saw a lion when it was night and I was surprise again, and then I call my friends to see it. And it look like this:

By: Ammar